Wednesday 12 November 2014

Drones - Friday Flash


The pipers settled the three drone pipes across their shoulder and struck up the threnody to the airmen in full regalia who marched into superannuation afore radio-controlled pilotless aircraft. The monotone of his mother’s hectoring had become so annoying to him, a perpetual vibration in his ear as if she were an insect lodged there. The male bees hovered uselessly outside the hive, lacking for any weapons to repel the waves of yellow jackets and robber flies, while their valiant brethren lay down their lives in useless hecatomb before these tomb raiders as they picked clean the  honeycomb’s treasury. He had grown stale to her, idle, unemployed which only increased his hankering for sex, yet his indolence had infected and corroded that one single activity too. He honed the rising and falling intonation of his voice against the continuous pitch of the shruti box, as if the two sounds were doing battle, that the envious drone wanted to suck the very oscillations of breath from him and reduce him to flatness, to prevent him soaring towards god. He had no spunk, no backbone, allowing himself to be pushed around, ordered to do this and that by all and sundry and she hated that she had initiated that and broken him. The villagers recognised the drone of the engine of a craft zeroing in on one of their number in the mountains, but these days there was no triumph in shooting down the foe, for there was no one at the wheel, no corpse to parade, yet still they were the ones accused of lacking humanity? The constant repetition, the sustained pitch, the buzz and hum that never seeks resolution but only to persist like a nag, a vexation, a pest and a pestilence, Aum seemed unobtainable in this life to him. 



Taken from my new flash fiction collection published September 18th


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5 comments:

Helen A. Howell said...

I can almost hear the drone of the drones!

Casey said...

Some tremendous wordage to evoke sounds and conflict.

Steve Green said...

Awesome. It puts me ion mind a little of what it must have been like to hear the sound of the V1 flying bombs in WW2 London.

Sonia Lal said...

The sounds are very vivid. Which is strange.

Katherine Hajer said...

Oh, that link from the bagpipes (love bagpipes!) to the airmen and their robots does have a cruel twist now. A nice horizontal slice (vibration?) through the word.